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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Sentence clarity and flow
Are these three sentences correct and flow well together?
Crysania soon traveled to the town of Solace with the kender hero Tasslehoff Burrfoot to get Raistlin’s twin brother, Caramon Majere, to assist her in journeying to the Tower of High Sorcery in Wayreth. However, Crysania did not know that Caramon had fallen into a state of depression because he felt unneeded by anyone, particularly Raistlin. Caramon’s wife, Tika, sent him and Tasslehoff with Crysania rather than letting her go by herself on the dangerous journey to the Tower.
Crysania soon traveled to the town of Solace with the kender hero Tasslehoff Burrfoot to get Raistlin’s twin brother, Caramon Majere, to assist her in journeying to the Tower of High Sorcery in Wayreth. However, Crysania did not know that Caramon had fallen into a state of depression because he felt unneeded by anyone, particularly Raistlin. Caramon’s wife, Tika, sent him and Tasslehoff with Crysania rather than letting her go by herself on the dangerous journey to the Tower.
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cboutin3 Are these three sentences correct and flow well together? Your text is fine. Can you find an error in construction in your question?
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