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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Hi. I have been trying to argue in my essay that knowledge (especially at the university) should go beyond the structure of education aiming at providing students with social and life-long skills apart from academic ones.
Could you please tell me whether my sentence in bold makes sense to you? If it needs any corrections, please let me know. Thank you in advance.
Could you please tell me whether my sentence in bold makes sense to you? If it needs any corrections, please let me know. Thank you in advance.
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Anonymous Could you please tell me whether my sentence in bold makes sense to you? It is not well constructed. You have made no effort to revise for clarity, brevity, and directness.
- Anonymous Could you please tell me whether my sentence in bold makes sense to you?
- It is not well constructed.
- You have made no effort to revise for clarity, brevity, and directness.
- Education should go beyond mere academics and also aim at providing students with social skills.
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AnonymousCould you please tell me whether my sentence in bold makes sense to you?It is not well constructed. You have made no effort to revise for clarity, brevity, and directness.
Education should go beyond mere academics and also aim at providing students with social skills.
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