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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Sentence clarity
Is it clear that the 'who had also...ghosts' part of the sentence only refers to the dwarves from Mirabar?
Around that time, dwarves from Icewind Dale and the city of Mirabar, who had also been visited by dwarf ghosts, arrived in another part of Gauntlgrym to help entrap the primordial.
Around that time, dwarves from Icewind Dale and the city of Mirabar, who had also been visited by dwarf ghosts, arrived in another part of Gauntlgrym to help entrap the primordial.
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Awesome, thanks a lot for all your help. I just posted a bunch of questions because I am taking your and other peoples' advice about not using parentheses in my formal writing so I tried to change and restructure many sentences. If you don't mind, could you please check out and answer my questions? Thanks so much everything either way.
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