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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Sentence choice
Which option for the sentences would be a better choice?
1. The elf Solostaran hoped that the child would turn out to be his brother’s, but he knew the truth as soon as he set his eyes upon the baby. A half-elf, to him this was a bastard child that should not have been allowed to be in Qualinesti.
2.The elf Solostaran hoped that the child would turn out to be his brother’s, but he knew the truth as soon as he set his eyes upon the baby: a half-elf. To him, this was a bastard child that should not have been allowed to be in Qualinesti.
1. The elf Solostaran hoped that the child would turn out to be his brother’s, but he knew the truth as soon as he set his eyes upon the baby. A half-elf, to him this was a bastard child that should not have been allowed to be in Qualinesti.
2.The elf Solostaran hoped that the child would turn out to be his brother’s, but he knew the truth as soon as he set his eyes upon the baby: a half-elf. To him, this was a bastard child that should not have been allowed to be in Qualinesti.
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#2 Note: To me, the use of up on in this case sounds dated, less natural than on .
- #2 Note: To me, the use of up on in this case sounds dated, less natural than on .
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#2 Note: To me, the use of upon in this case sounds dated, less natural than on.
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