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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Which sentence option is better? FYI- Caramon and Raistlin are brothers.
1. Caramon alone emerged from the arena and then made his way to the Temple of Paladine, where Raistlin magically transported himself, his brother, and Crysania forward in time to 39 AC, to the Tower of High Sorcery in Palanthas.
2. Caramon alone emerged from the arena and then made his way to the Temple of Paladine. There, Raistlin magically transported himself, Caramon, and Crysania forward in time to 39 AC, to the Tower of High Sorcery in Palanthas.
1. Caramon alone emerged from the arena and then made his way to the Temple of Paladine, where Raistlin magically transported himself, his brother, and Crysania forward in time to 39 AC, to the Tower of High Sorcery in Palanthas.
2. Caramon alone emerged from the arena and then made his way to the Temple of Paladine. There, Raistlin magically transported himself, Caramon, and Crysania forward in time to 39 AC, to the Tower of High Sorcery in Palanthas.
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Two sentences are often better than one.
- Two sentences are often better than one.
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