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Jack.Dalton Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Sentence check vol.13

Hi. I was wondering if you could help me with some sentences:

  1. Computer games give players a sense of power and let them realise their wildest dreams and desires. (is it correct?)
  2. (it’s about people looking for a date on-line) Since they are not afraid of making fools of themselves, they find it easier to 'virtual - flirt' and talk openly about their feelings. (does it make sense? Or should it be “....they are afraid...”)
  3. If they violate these regulations, they are expelled from the school. (is the use of “the” correct?)
  4. However, many psychologists suggest that autocratic parenting doesn't produce any positive results. Instead, it warps the child's psyche. (shouldn’t it be “a child’s psyche”?)
  5. Freudian psychology revealed that many complexes and much mental illness can be traced back to the unhappiness and bad experiences of childhood. (is the word “much” correct in this sentence?)
I would really appreciate it if you could help me.
  

Top answer

1. Okay. 2.

— Anonymous

  • 1.
  • Okay.
  • 2.
  • This is okay.
  • When you're on a dating site, you typically are anonymous, so you're not afraid of making a fool of yourself.
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1. Okay.

2. This is okay. When you're on a dating site, you typically are anonymous, so you're not afraid of making a fool of yourself.

3. This looks okay. It depends on the context however.

4. This looks okay. It depends on the context however.

5. This is okay.
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