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Jack.Dalton Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Sentence check vol. 11

Hello!

I need help with some sentences:

  1. to wait for natural death (shouldn’t it be “a natural death”?)
  2. Undoubtedly, victory is of great importance for each competitor.(shouldn’t it be “a victory”?)
  3. The successful cloning of the sheep was possible thanks to a new technique involving the transplantation of the genetic material of an adult sheep into an egg from which the DNA nucleus had been removed. (can we use here “egg” meaning “egg cell”?)
  4. Besides, no one knows how to guarantee that cloning will not lead to serious abnormalities in the offspring or be a danger to the mother. (shouldn’t it be “a mother”)
  5. The cloned child may also suffer from the pressure of living up to other people's expectations and becoming like the person with whom the child was cloned. (is this sentence correct?)
Thank you. Emotion: smile
  

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All five sentences are okay.

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  • All five sentences are okay.
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All five sentences are okay.
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