The sentence:
Jeff is talking to Sean in his office when the deafening sound of machine gun fire erupts somewhere upstairs.
- Can I write 'upstairs' here if the shooting is going on three floors above where Jeff and Sean are? Or would it be better to write 'above'?
- Also, is the sentence OK and the word choices natural?
Thanks.
anonymous would it be better to write 'above'? Yes. Personally, I use 'upstairs' only in referring to the upper floor of a residence.
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anonymouswould it be better to write 'above'?
Yes.
Personally, I use 'upstairs' only in referring to the upper floor of a residence. I wouldn't use it for an upper floor of an office building, for example.
The rest is all OK.
CJ