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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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my tutorial teacher said the second sentence is grammatically incorrect. what do you think?? perhaps move the comma so it reads ...views, this firstly, could... i'm not even sure that is where the problem is... i think is fine...

All three founding members were far from the lower middle-class of their targeted public. Educated, literate, and with leftist political views, this, firstly could prove problematic to the value of Mass Observation at the Movies to the historian.
  

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Hi, my tutorial teacher said the second sentence is grammatically incorrect. what do you think?? views, this firstly, could...

  • Hi, my tutorial teacher said the second sentence is grammatically incorrect.
  • what do you think??
  • views, this firstly, could...
  • i'm not even sure that is where the problem is...
  • i think is fine...
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Hi,

my tutorial teacher said the second sentence is grammatically incorrect. what do you think?? perhaps move the comma so it reads ...views, this firstly, could... i'm not even sure that is where the problem is... i think is fine...

All three founding members were far from the lower middle-class of their targeted public. Educated, literate, and with leftist political views, t

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