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Chalk hat Posted 9 years ago
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Girls what you want to say about Sunday's break fast menu that the caterer told that they will provide veg chow instead of rice if you people will be agree?

  

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That's hard to understand. You are trying to say too much in one sentence, Try saying it in two or more sentences,

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  • You are trying to say too much in one sentence, Try saying it in two or more sentences,
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That's hard to understand. You are trying to say too much in one sentence, Try saying it in two or more sentences,

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It isn't very coherent. My best guess is that you mean something like this:

Girls, the caterers said that they will provide veg chow[?] on Sunday's breakfast menu instead of rice if you people agree. What do you think?

I'm not sure about "veg chow". It could be a dish that I don't know, or it could be a mistake for something else.

(Cross-posted.)

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