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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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Hi. Can someone tell my if this sentence is correct if not can you please correct it. Sentence: These charges were originally paid by Mr. Fox then Expedia rang us asking for a refund of this payment as full account should has been billed back to Expedia. I am forwarding the email which was sent by Expedia as confirmation.
  

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I'm sorry, but it's not clear who did what to whom. Who is Mr. Fox?

  • I'm sorry, but it's not clear who did what to whom.
  • Who is Mr.
  • Fox?
  • Who did he pay?
  • Us?
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I'm sorry, but it's not clear who did what to whom.

Who is Mr. Fox? Who did he pay? Us? Or Expedia?
Who is supposed to refund Mr. Fox's payment? Us? Or Expedia?
To whom are they supposed to refund the payment to? Mr. Fox? Us? Expedia?

Please clarify.

CJ

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