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Irfan Ansari Posted 14 years ago
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Reference to your request about the subject, please find below our best offer for the same,
  

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Hi, That's terrible business jargon. I suggest the simpler and more direct In response to your request, here is our best offer. Clive

— Clive

  • Hi, That's terrible business jargon.
  • I suggest the simpler and more direct In response to your request, here is our best offer.
  • Clive
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Hi,

That's terrible business jargon.

I suggest the simpler and more direct
In response to your request, here is our best offer.

Clive
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