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PreciousJones Posted 15 years ago
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Honestly, I think the only reason he approached me was for his own sake. Because if I were to rejoin the team, expenses such as plane tickets, hotel accommodations and other methods of travel would be completely reimbursed by the company. This means that he won't have to pay out of his own pocket and at the same time increase manpower to promote products.

Please correct this paragraph for me.

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Honestly, I think the only reason he approached me was for his own benefit, because if I were to rejoin the team, expenses such as transportation and hotel accommodations would be reimburse d by the company , so he wouldn't have to pay them out of his own pocket , and at the same time he would increase the manpower to promote his products.

  • Honestly, I think the only reason he approached me was for his own benefit, because if I were to rejoin the team, expenses such as transportation and hotel accommodations would be reimburse d by the company , so he wouldn't have to pay them out of his own pocket , and at the same time he would increase the manpower to promote his products.
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Honestly, I think the only reason he approached me was for his own benefit, because if I were to rejoin the team, expenses such as transportation and hotel accommodations would be reimbursed by the company, so he wouldn't have to pay them out of his own pocket, and at the same time he would increase the manpower to promote his p

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