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PreciousJones Posted 16 years ago
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Sentence check!

Hi,

Good luck w/ negotiating w/ Jae and hopefully she'll lower the rent to within your budget. Very nice meeting you and good luck with everything.

Thank y'all !
  

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Hi, This is OK as very casual writing. But I usually don't see 'with' written in that way. Clive

— Clive

  • Hi, This is OK as very casual writing.
  • But I usually don't see 'with' written in that way.
  • Clive
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Hi,



This is OK as very casual writing. But I usually don't see 'with' written in that way.



Clive
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CliveHi,

This is OK as very casual writing. But I usually don't see 'with' written in that way.

Clive
Could you please correct it so it's more native? Thanks!
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Hi,

Good luck w/ negotiating w/ Jae and hopefully she'll lower the rent to within your budget. Very nice meeting you and good luck with everything.

Good luck negotiating with Jae. I hope she'll lower the rent to suit your budget. It was very nice to meet you, and good luck with everything.



Clive
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