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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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Please check the usage of the highlighted text:

This signifies that the member cannot withdraw funds from an ATM more than 20 times in 30 days using the ATM /debit card.



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Hi, Please check the usage of the highlighted text: This signifies that the member cannot withdraw funds from an ATM more than (OK) 20 times in 30 days using his or her / an the ATM /debit card. How about this? The member can withdraw funds from an ATM a maximum of 20 times in 30 days.

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  • Hi, Please check the usage of the highlighted text: This signifies that the member cannot withdraw funds from an ATM more than (OK) 20 times in 30 days using his or her / an the ATM /debit card.
  • How about this?
  • The member can withdraw funds from an ATM a maximum of 20 times in 30 days.
  • OR This signifies that the member cannot withdraw funds from an ATM for more than (not OK) 20 times in 30 days using the ATM / debit card.
  • -- In the following sentence "exceeding" is used, whereas in the above sentences I have used "more than".
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Hi,

Please check the usage of the highlighted text:

This signifies that the member cannot withdraw funds from an ATM more than (OK) 20 times in 30 days using his or her / an the ATM /debit card.

How about this?

The member can withdraw funds from an ATM a maximum of 20 times in 30 days.

OR

This signifies
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