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Antonija Posted 17 years ago
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However, they too, claim that preventing ethnic closure as well as preventing the „ethnic key" to become a dominant framework for interpreting and organising social life, is an important factor which differentiates peace enclaves from areas afflicted by ethnic violence
  

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However, they too, claim that preventing ethnic closure as well as preventing the "ethnic key" to becoming a dominant framework for interpreting and organising social life, is an important factor which differentiates peace enclaves from areas afflicted by ethnic violence. This is okay. It's not clear what you mean by 'ethnic key'.

— Wmoynan

  • However, they too, claim that preventing ethnic closure as well as preventing the "ethnic key" to becoming a dominant framework for interpreting and organising social life, is an important factor which differentiates peace enclaves from areas afflicted by ethnic violence.
  • This is okay.
  • It's not clear what you mean by 'ethnic key'.
  • I'd need to know the overall context to make it any clearer.
  • Regards, Wesley
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However, they too, claim that preventing ethnic closure as well as preventing the "ethnic key" to becoming a dominant framework for interpreting and organising social life, is an important factor which differentiates peace enclaves from areas afflicted by ethnic violence.

This is okay. It's not clear what you mean by 'ethnic key'. I'd need to know the overall context to make it any cle
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Hi wmoynan. Thank you for your help.
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