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SunFlowerSeed Posted 19 years ago
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0 Can someone check these sentences and correct or show mistakes.02br
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00The civil registry should be well studied in order to assure the success of the project according to the optimal way due to scientific, logical and clear basics which will be completing other organizations saving energy and public money in executing the project without problems.02br
00Considering the particularity of the population’s distribution the geographic and civil elements in providing the basic services helping the execution, such as the telecommunication service technique, electricity, roads to order to reach the habitation gathering.02br
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00Thanks to all who participates.02br
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02font 02br 02br 00Both of these sentences have a number of problems, and their meaning is hard to see. I strongly suggest that you should rewrite them, breaking them into shorter sentences. That will not only help to correct the errors, but also make your meaning easier to follow.

— Clive

  • 02font 02br 02br 00Both of these sentences have a number of problems, and their meaning is hard to see.
  • I strongly suggest that you should rewrite them, breaking them into shorter sentences.
  • That will not only help to correct the errors, but also make your meaning easier to follow.
  • 05002br 02br 00Best wishes, Clive010id1
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0Hi,02br
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0 Thanks Clive,02br
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00You are right but this is the problem that I cannot break them into shorter sentences due to my contract, which says translate as it is without changing anything. Looks nonsense but I'd better keep rules. It is an commercial document.02br
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00I will try a rewrite.02br
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1font00Hi,02font02br
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001) 01font00The civil registry should be well studied to assure the success of the project to find the optimal way for scientific, logical and clear basics which will be completing other organizations' saving energy and public money in executing the project without problems.02font
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0 Thanks for your help Clive. I really appreciated it.02br
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00You are right about 'without changing anything' too.02br
00I think that they know it would be hard for me to get all the meaning in that complicated document.02br
00So they just don't want me to make things harder for them 05002br
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00Because someone else will
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