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Antonia Posted 21 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

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Hello!

Can you please read this sentece? It is too long and clumsy. Do you have any ideas how to make it better?

The next step are practical suggestions, discussion about the differences of/in attitudes, presenting arguments, considering possible favourable outcomes, concessions and clauses which can be considered to be a subject of the possible exchange and eventually negotiating the terms of exchange.

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'. Also, it does not sound right to me that you mix nouns and '-ing' forms of the verb (there is a word for this but it escapes me at the moment). Here I'm referring to 'suggestions...

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  • Also, it does not sound right to me that you mix nouns and '-ing' forms of the verb (there is a word for this but it escapes me at the moment).
  • Here I'm referring to 'suggestions...
  • ' on one hand and 'presenting...
  • ' on the other.
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Should be 'the next step IS...' and actually I would use some other verb like 'the next step consists in...'.

Also, it does not sound right to me that you mix nouns and '-ing' forms of the verb (there is a word for this but it escapes me at the moment). Here I'm referring to 'suggestions... discussions...' on one hand and 'presenting... considering....' on the other. But here again maybe
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Here is my attempt. Can you please tell me if it is OK? I'm not sure that all the articles are OK.

The next step consists in making practical suggestions, discussing differences of attitudes, presentating arguments and considering possible favourable outcomes, concessions and clauses which can be considered to be subject of possible exchange and eventually negotiating the terms of exc
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I agree that all the articles aren't ok...

'... subject of A possible exchange...'
'... the terms of THE exchange...'

Also, comma missing after '...possible exchange'.
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Please correct my following sentence:

"Will you please accept me after I finish my one year MBA (full-time) from here? Please do reply because I’m very much looking forward to get into ."

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Hi,

"Will you please accept me after I finish my one year MBA (full-time) from here? Please do reply because I’m very much looking forward to get into University of Hampshire."

"Will you please accept me after I finish my one year MBA (full-time) here? IPlease reply because I’m very much looking forward to getting into the University of Hampshire."
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Hi

I would like you to help me by checking my writing this attch file

worm regards

Pleasur

Recommendations to the Future Students

What I want to say to the future student is. We often take recommendation from friends and family because we trust their opinion. Part of that trust is built on our relationship. They know us better than anyone else so
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AntoniaHello!

Can you please read this sentece? It is too long and clumsy. Do you have any ideas how to make it better?

Hello! Good Mornin.. Actually, i would like to postpone my driving class scheduled for this friday to next week..Is class available at 11am on monday..Okie then i'll pay on monday morning for the class..

Thank you

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