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Watermelon2 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

sentence building

Dear Sirs/Madams,

I am wondering if my sentence below is grammar correct. I appreciate your kind help.

"The Governing Board decided to start up a business—buying diesel from the wholesaler and sell it to the cooperative members"

Thank you
Watermelon2
  

Top answer

" cooperative members is OK, but it sounds too much like the members who cooperate with the program.

  • " cooperative members is OK, but it sounds too much like the members who cooperate with the program.
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"The Governing Board decided to start up a business—buying diesel from the wholesaler and selling it to the members of the cooperative members."

cooperative members is OK, but it sounds too much like the members who cooperate with the program.
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Thank you very much for your help.

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