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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Is this sentence correct? If so can it be improved in any way?

Another highlight of our program is the weekly seminar series presented by guest professionals, covering recent genetics-related hot topics and research findings.

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'Hot' is a bit lame there. Another highlight of our program is the weekly seminar series presented by guest professionals, covering recent genetics-related topics and research findings.

— Mister Micawber

  • 'Hot' is a bit lame there.
  • Another highlight of our program is the weekly seminar series presented by guest professionals, covering recent genetics-related topics and research findings.
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'Hot' is a bit lame there.

Another highlight of our program is the weekly seminar series presented by guest professionals, covering recent genetics-related topics and research findings.
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Mister MicawberHot' is a bit lame there.Another highlight of our program is the weekly seminar series presented by guest professionals, covering recent genetics-related topics and research findings.
Got it, thanks a lot teacher. I will eliminate ‘hot’. I am glad that there are no other errors and that you don’t think it needs improvement!

I am assumi
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AnonymousI am assuming that the placement of the comma is right and required, right?
Not required but a good choice.
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