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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Is this sentence grammatical and meaningful?

The weather is hot, but it becomes sweeter with an ice cream and (when) going to the cinema.

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'Sweet' is not the antonym of 'hot'. Your precise meaning about the connection between ice cream and the cinema is unclear. Here is one possible solution: The weather is hot, but it becomes cooler with an ice cream on the way to the cinema.

  • 'Sweet' is not the antonym of 'hot'.
  • Your precise meaning about the connection between ice cream and the cinema is unclear.
  • Here is one possible solution: The weather is hot, but it becomes cooler with an ice cream on the way to the cinema.
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'Sweet' is not the antonym of 'hot'. Your precise meaning about the connection between ice cream and the cinema is unclear. Here is one possible solution:

The weather is hot, but it becomes cooler with an ice cream on the way to the cinema.
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Mister Micawber'Sweet' is not the antonym of 'hot'. Your precise meaning about the connection between ice cream and the cinema is unclear. Here is one possible solution:The weather is hot, but it becomes cooler with an ice cream on the way to the cinema.
Thanks for your help teacher. I thought that the sentence was unclear and incorrect maybe.

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