Sentence Accuracy.
I wasn't sure what was wrong with these two examples the first is from Wikipedia. First example just doesn't sound right to me ?
The second is describing an occurrence, but does the writer need to be more specific. For instance: The moment when he described. Is the sentence accurate as it is ?
(especially since his son and heir, Henry Herbert, having married Henry Grey's other daughter, Catherine, the same day as Jane's wedding.
When he described what he had drunk on a single day ,but hadn't thought of it as excessive, you have to wonder where he's been during the decades of warnings
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panda blue 483 (especially since his son and heir, Henry Herbert, having married Henry Grey's other daughter, Catherine, the same day as Jane's wedding. The confusing unmatched bracket, and the fact that it is a fragment rather than a whole sentence, make this hard to evaluate as you have presented it. However, from the full text on Wikipedia it is clear that the sentence is not correct.
- panda blue 483 (especially since his son and heir, Henry Herbert, having married Henry Grey's other daughter, Catherine, the same day as Jane's wedding.
- The confusing unmatched bracket, and the fact that it is a fragment rather than a whole sentence, make this hard to evaluate as you have presented it.
- However, from the full text on Wikipedia it is clear that the sentence is not correct.
- The simplest fix appears to be to change "having married" to "had married".
- panda blue 483 When he described what he had drunk on a single day ,but hadn't thought of it as excessive, you have to wonder where he's been during the decades of warnings This is incorrect.
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panda blue 483(especially since his son and heir, Henry Herbert, having married Henry Grey's other daughter, Catherine, the same day as Jane's wedding.
The confusing unmatched bracket, and the fact that it is a fragment rather than a whole sentence, make this hard to evaluate as you have presented it. However, from the full text on Wikipedia it is clear tha
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