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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

sentence about a song

This sentence is about a song

Could you tell me if the following sentence makes sense?
The fact that on the show they had two siblings singing the song was a good idea. The artist who wrote this song originally wrote it for to his girlfriend or about a couple but the song could be sung to a sibling or could be about siblings

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'The fact that' is a particularly noxious phrase that should be avoided whenever possible. You also need to learn how to conserve words and build style: Having two siblings singing the song on the show was a good idea. The original artist wrote this song about his girlfriend or about a couple , but it could be sung to a sibling or about siblings.

— Mister Micawber

  • 'The fact that' is a particularly noxious phrase that should be avoided whenever possible.
  • You also need to learn how to conserve words and build style: Having two siblings singing the song on the show was a good idea.
  • The original artist wrote this song about his girlfriend or about a couple , but it could be sung to a sibling or about siblings.
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'The fact that' is a particularly noxious phrase that should be avoided whenever possible. You also need to learn how to conserve words and build style:

Having two siblings singing the song on the show was a good idea. The original artist wrote this song about his girlfriend or about a couple, but it could be sung to a sibling or about sibl
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