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Alex722 Posted 5 years ago
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Hello. Could you please check if the second sentence below sounds natural?


Please be informed that my authority has extended Mr. Tahirovish's tenure at UN from 1 December 2020 till 31 December 2020 due to some administrative constraints. We would be grateful if you could facilitate the communication of this information to his headquarter.

  

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The entire passage is simply awful and horrible writing for any business correspondence in contemporary American English or even British English. It is a relic of the Raj and Victorian formality from the 1800s.

  • The entire passage is simply awful and horrible writing for any business correspondence in contemporary American English or even British English.
  • It is a relic of the Raj and Victorian formality from the 1800s.
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The entire passage is simply awful and horrible writing for any business correspondence in contemporary American English or even British English. It is a relic of the Raj and Victorian formality from the 1800s.

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