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Christine Christie Posted 5 years ago
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"The news reached the ears of the King of Spain, and he too became so enthusiastic that he decided to celebrate it, with a banquet in the Palace together with the advisers of this court."


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Christine Christie Is this sentence correct: I don't see a problem.

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Christine ChristieIs this sentence correct:

I don't see a problem.

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Christine Christiehe too became so enthusiastic that he decided to celebrate it, with a banquet ...

The 'too' suggests that others were also so enthusiastic that they also decided to celebrate with a banquet. That has a lot more people holding a banquet than I think you intended.

Be careful of your commas and capitalizatio

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