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Christine Christie Posted 6 years ago
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Is this sentence correct:


"The diversity which is well visible on an ample scale in our world should serve to marvel us, and never to cause conflicts."

  

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No. It's ungrammatical and unnatural. Note that "marvel" as a verb is intransitive.

— Teechr

  • No.
  • It's ungrammatical and unnatural.
  • Note that "marvel" as a verb is intransitive.
  • Try: The world's marvelous diversity should serve to unite rather than divide us.
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No. It's ungrammatical and unnatural. Note that "marvel" as a verb is intransitive. Try:

The world's marvelous diversity should serve to unite rather than divide us.

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Christine ChristieThe diversity which is well visible on an ample scale in our world should serve to marvel us, and never to cause conflicts.

The underlined parts are problematic. Here are a few versions that may give you some ideas for improving it.

The diversity which is visible on an ample scale in our world should serve to make u

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