Hello, I need your kind support to check whether the sentence below is ok (from official letter).
The aforementioned issues have been manifested on the low filling rate (˜30%) of the existing positions, which is a token of the interest shown by Nations towards those positions.
Did you write this sentence? It is not very natural English.
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