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Christine Christie Posted 6 years ago
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Is this sentence correct:



"Religion played an important role UNTIL a point in my life, but some things that I learned throughout life SHOOK my faith."

  

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I think that "in my life" and "throughout life" are so easily inferred from the context that they can easily be omitted. I think I prefer "up to" instead of "until" in this sentence. Religion played an important role up to a point, but some things I learned shook my faith.

  • I think that "in my life" and "throughout life" are so easily inferred from the context that they can easily be omitted.
  • I think I prefer "up to" instead of "until" in this sentence.
  • Religion played an important role up to a point, but some things I learned shook my faith.
  • CJ
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I think that "in my life" and "throughout life" are so easily inferred from the context that they can easily be omitted.

I think I prefer "up to" instead of "until" in this sentence.

Religion played an important role up to a point, but some things I learned shook my faith.

CJ

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