Is this sentence correct:
"Religion played an important role UNTIL a point in my life, but some things that I learned throughout life SHOOK my faith."
I think that "in my life" and "throughout life" are so easily inferred from the context that they can easily be omitted. I think I prefer "up to" instead of "until" in this sentence. Religion played an important role up to a point, but some things I learned shook my faith.
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I think that "in my life" and "throughout life" are so easily inferred from the context that they can easily be omitted.
I think I prefer "up to" instead of "until" in this sentence.
Religion played an important role up to a point, but some things I learned shook my faith.
CJ