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Christine Christie Posted 7 years ago
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Does this sentence make sense:


"He said he was proud of his doctorate because it CONVEYED some of his most importante beliefs."

  

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" It's OK. "expressed" would also be good. CJ

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  • " It's OK.
  • "expressed" would also be good.
  • CJ
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Christine Christie

Does this sentence make sense:


"He said he was proud of his doctorate because it CONVEYED some of his most importante important beliefs."

It's OK. "expressed" would also be good.

CJ

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It's better to say "He said he was proud of his doctoral thesis because it CONVEYED some of his most important beliefs."

A doctorate doesn't really convey beliefs.

Clive

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