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Alex722 Posted 7 years ago
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Hello. Could you please tell me whether the structure of the sentence below is good?

This is to certify that on 10.09.2019, by the order the Minister of Defence, Captain John has been promoted to the rank Major.

  

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The structure is good, but it's not clear whether the date is 10th September or October 9th. the rank of Major.

  • The structure is good, but it's not clear whether the date is 10th September or October 9th.
  • the rank of Major.
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The structure is good, but it's not clear whether the date is 10th September or October 9th.

... the rank of Major.

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Captain John

John is his last name, right?

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