Hello. Would you mind to tell me whether the sentence below sounds natural? This is translation and therefore I can't change it much.
The department has been expanded, as a result of the activities on optimization its staff structure, which started in 2017.
My response: As a result of staff optimization measures undertaken in 2017, the department has expanded.
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My response:
As a result of staff optimization measures undertaken in 2017, the department has expanded.