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Alex722 Posted 7 years ago
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Hello. Would you mind to tell me whether the sentence below sounds natural? This is translation and therefore I can't change it much.


The department has been expanded, as a result of the activities on optimization its staff structure, which started in 2017.

  

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My response: As a result of staff optimization measures undertaken in 2017, the department has expanded.

  • My response: As a result of staff optimization measures undertaken in 2017, the department has expanded.
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My response:

As a result of staff optimization measures undertaken in 2017, the department has expanded.

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