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Hello. Could you please check whether the sentence below sounds ok? Thank you in advance.
This visit would be a unique opportunity to introduce the system to the target audience and shed light on questions of concerns.
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Alex722 This visit would be a unique opportunity to introduce the system to the target audience and shed light on questions of concerns. The grammar is fine, but the usage is not quite right after 'and'. The sentence starts beautifully, but it goes pear-shaped at 'shed light on questions of concerns'.
- Alex722 This visit would be a unique opportunity to introduce the system to the target audience and shed light on questions of concerns.
- The grammar is fine, but the usage is not quite right after 'and'.
- The sentence starts beautifully, but it goes pear-shaped at 'shed light on questions of concerns'.
- I think you're saying that the visit will reveal the concerns of the target audience, or will help you to determine their concerns.
- To my ear, 'shed light' seems more appropriate for some kind of mystery to be solved, not the sort of exploratory situation you have here.
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Alex722This visit would be a unique opportunity to introduce the system to the target audience and shed light on questions of concerns.
The grammar is fine, but the usage is not quite right after 'and'. The sentence starts beautifully, but it goes pear-shaped at 'shed light on questions of concerns'.
I think you're saying that the visit will reveal t
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