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We will officially communicate this date with our capital if you could both give me your final green light regarding that date.
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What does 'our capital' mean? Are you talking about the capital city of your country? The idiom give a green light seems too casual here.
- What does 'our capital' mean?
- Are you talking about the capital city of your country?
- The idiom give a green light seems too casual here.
- You communicate something to , not with .
- Try to avoid repetition, ( .
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What does 'our capital' mean? Are you talking about the capital city of your country?
The idiom give a green light seems too casual here.
You communicate something to, not with.
Try to avoid repetition, ( . . . this date . . . that date. . .)
I suggest this.
If you both agree with this date, we will officially inform our c
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