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Ty123 Posted 8 years ago
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Is this okay: If u can’t feel my intentions for you come purely from my heart & soul then I don’t think were meant for each other and I have nothing more to say.
  

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" And this is just me being picky about writing, but I would leave out "& soul". People always put "heart and soul" together and it's a cliche. Pick one - heart or soul.

— Kaperton

  • " And this is just me being picky about writing, but I would leave out "& soul".
  • People always put "heart and soul" together and it's a cliche.
  • Pick one - heart or soul.
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It should be "we're meant for each other."


And this is just me being picky about writing, but I would leave out "& soul". People always put "heart and soul" together and it's a cliche. Pick one - heart or soul.

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"u" is a horrible low-grade abbreviation that instantly cheapens your writing. Write "you".

"&" is out of place here. Write "and".

"were" should be "we're" (= "we are").

I would write "If you can't feel that my intentions ...". While omitting "that" is grammatically permissible, this makes it easy to read "my intentions" as the direct object of "feel". Then, when this

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