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Alex722 Posted 8 years ago
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Hi, could please check the sentence below. Please do not hesitate to amend it if it doesn't sound natural.

We are fully aware of the fact that the mentioned map is not contemporary but, nevertheless illustrated territorial borders of "X country" on this map distorts the historical truth and mislead users.

  

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This version is better. We are fully aware that this map is not contemporary. Nevertheless, the territorial borders shown for "X "distort the historical truth and mislead readers.

  • This version is better.
  • We are fully aware that this map is not contemporary.
  • Nevertheless, the territorial borders shown for "X "distort the historical truth and mislead readers.
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This version is better.

We are fully aware that this map is not contemporary. Nevertheless, the territorial borders shown for "X "distort the historical truth and mislead readers.

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