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Alex722 Posted 8 years ago
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Regular review of existing doctrines and their update with the reflection of new challenges we all encounter keeps our capabilities up-to-date on the latest development in a number of areas, which is very much appreciated.

Thank you

  

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The word 'doctrines' is not suitable here. Can you say it another way? You are trying to say too much in one big sentence.

— Clive

  • The word 'doctrines' is not suitable here.
  • Can you say it another way?
  • You are trying to say too much in one big sentence.
  • Try to reword it into two or more sentences.
  • Keep it as simple as possible.
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The word 'doctrines' is not suitable here. Can you say it another way?

You are trying to say too much in one big sentence. Try to reword it into two or more sentences. Keep it as simple as possible.

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