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Alex722 Posted 8 years ago
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Hello everyone.

I have a bit long sentence and would like your confirmation whether it is correct.

The discussions with the Department of Peacekeeping Operations (DPKO) and various countries on medical and other preparation issues of personnel who will be deployed to UN missions have already been initiated.

Thank you in advance

  

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Alex722 The discussions with the Department of Peacekeeping Operations (DPKO) and various countries on medical and other preparation issues of personnel who will be deployed to UN missions have already been initiated. Discussions have already been initiated with the Department of Peacekeeping Operations (DPKO) and various countries on medical and other preparations for personnel to be deployed to UN missions.

  • Alex722 The discussions with the Department of Peacekeeping Operations (DPKO) and various countries on medical and other preparation issues of personnel who will be deployed to UN missions have already been initiated.
  • Discussions have already been initiated with the Department of Peacekeeping Operations (DPKO) and various countries on medical and other preparations for personnel to be deployed to UN missions.
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Alex722The discussions with the Department of Peacekeeping Operations (DPKO) and various countries on medical and other preparation issues of personnel who will be deployed to UN missions have already been initiated.

Discussions have already been initiated with the Department of Peacekeeping Operations (DPKO) and various countries on medical and other pr

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