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Alex722 Posted 8 years ago
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Hello,

Could you please check whether the following sentence sounds natural?

In order to enhance the established cooperation and develop in-depth experience in the subject matter, our officer has been taking service in the XXXXX unit since the beginning of 2018.


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In order to enhance the established cooperation and develop in-depth experience in the subject matter, our officer has been taking service serving in the XXXXX unit since the beginning of 2018. It's the kind of English that bureaucrats write.

  • In order to enhance the established cooperation and develop in-depth experience in the subject matter, our officer has been taking service serving in the XXXXX unit since the beginning of 2018.
  • It's the kind of English that bureaucrats write.
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In order to enhance the established cooperation and develop in-depth experience in the subject matter, our officer has been taking service serving in the XXXXX unit since the beginning of 2018.


It's the kind of English that bureaucrats write.

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