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To increase awareness on human rights in the Armed Forces, participation in various training, courses, and seminars for 2018, has been planned.
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Here are a few edits. It's still not a very good sentence. To increase awareness of on human rights in the Armed Forces, participation in various training no comma courses no comma and seminars no comma has been planned for 2018.
- Here are a few edits.
- It's still not a very good sentence.
- To increase awareness of on human rights in the Armed Forces, participation in various training no comma courses no comma and seminars no comma has been planned for 2018.
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Here are a few edits. It's still not a very good sentence.
To increase awareness of on human rights in the Armed Forces, participation in various training no comma courses no comma and seminars no comma has been planned for 2018.
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