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Vsuresh Posted 10 years ago
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Please tell me if this sentence is OK.
Thus, it can be concluded that one will be able to develop and maintain official and personal ties with people near and far with the help of social networking skills.
Please tell me if this sentence is OK.
Thus, it can be concluded that one will be able to develop and maintain official and personal ties with people near and far with the help of social networking skills.
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It seems OK. I wonder whether "one" is the most appropriate choice, but it is not possible to be sure without more context. ] will be able to develop and maintain official and personal ties with people near and far.
- It seems OK.
- I wonder whether "one" is the most appropriate choice, but it is not possible to be sure without more context.
- ] will be able to develop and maintain official and personal ties with people near and far.
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It seems OK. I wonder whether "one" is the most appropriate choice, but it is not possible to be sure without more context.
Depending on desired emphasis, you could also consider this:
Thus, it can be concluded that, with the help of social networking skills, one[?] will be able to develop and maintain official and personal ties with people near and far.
Depending on desired emphasis, you could also consider this:
Thus, it can be concluded that, with the help of social networking skills, one[?] will be able to develop and maintain official and personal ties with people near and far.
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GPYThus, it can be concluded that, with the help of social networking skills, one[?] will be able to develop and maintain official and personal ties with people near and far.Thank you,GPY.
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