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Vsuresh Posted 10 years ago
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Hi
Please tell me if this sentence is OK.

Big markets take advantage of the loose environment laws and cheap labor in the developing countries and open up factories there that emit harmful gases into the atmosphere.
  

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I would phrase it as: Large multinational companies often exploit lax environmental laws and cheap labour in developing countries to establish factories there that discharge harmful emissions into the environment. However, "emit harmful gases into the atmosphere" also works in that sentence.

  • I would phrase it as: Large multinational companies often exploit lax environmental laws and cheap labour in developing countries to establish factories there that discharge harmful emissions into the environment.
  • However, "emit harmful gases into the atmosphere" also works in that sentence.
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I would phrase it as:
Large multinational companies often exploit lax environmental laws and cheap labour in developing countries to establish factories there that discharge harmful emissions into the environment.

However, "emit harmful gases into the atmosphere" also works in that sentence.
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Your sentence is much better worded.

Thank you,teechr.
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You're welcome, vsuresh.

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