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Apprentice123 Posted 10 years ago
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Could anyone check problems in my sentence, please?
The way back to work took about ten minutes. It was amazing; we talked about girls, cars, and we played with my dog all the time.
Thanks
The way back to work took about ten minutes. It was amazing; we talked about girls, cars, and we played with my dog all the time.
Thanks
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Hello, Giovanni Perazzo—and welcome to English Forums. Thank you for registering as a member. The way back to work took about ten minutes.
- Hello, Giovanni Perazzo—and welcome to English Forums.
- Thank you for registering as a member.
- The way back to work took about ten minutes.
- It was amazing — we talked about girls and cars, and we played with my dog.
- The semicolon is too formal there.
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Hello, Giovanni Perazzo—and welcome to English Forums. Thank you for registering as a member.
The way back to work took about ten minutes. It was amazing—we talked about girls and cars, and we played with my dog.
The semicolon is too formal there. Ten minutes is not long enough to require 'all the time'.
The way back to work took about ten minutes. It was amazing—we talked about girls and cars, and we played with my dog.
The semicolon is too formal there. Ten minutes is not long enough to require 'all the time'.
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