The grammar is fine. The style is a bit melodramatic. CJ
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vsureshIt is a line from critical appreciation of a poem in which a river is personified.In that case you may want that kind of style.
CalifJimvsureshIt is a line from critical appreciation of a poem in which a river is personified.Thank you,CJ
vsureshPlease tell me if this is fine?Note that we use 'fine' in affirmative sentences to mean OK, acceptable, satisfactory. We don't use it in negative or interrogative sentences. I don't know why.
fivejedjon vsuresh Please tell me if this is fine?Note that we use 'fine' in affirmative sentences to mean OK, acceptable, satisfactory. We don't use it in negative or interrogative sentences. I don't know why.For some years now in the US, waiters and waitresses have been stopping by tables to ask Is everything tasting fine?
dave_anonBut nowadays, people understand the word 'fine' in various ways. So I'd say it's good to choose other wordsThank you,dave_anon.