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Vsuresh Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Sentence

Hi
Please tell me if this sentence is OK.
All the members expressed their support for all his efforts and pledged to work as a team.
  

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No problem. Stylistically, it could be improved.

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No problem. Stylistically, it could be improved.
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Thank you AlpheccaStars.

Could you tell me how you would put it?
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I assume that these are members of some club. They are not a team at this point.

The members expressed their support for all his efforts and pledged to cooperate with each other.
The members, expressing their support for all his efforts, pledged to work as a team (cooperatively),
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AlpheccaStarsI assume that these are members of some club. They are not a team at this point.
Yes.

Thank you very much for your sentences.
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