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Vsuresh Posted 11 years ago
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Please tell me if this is fine.
It is an introduction to cultural program:
With scintillating dance performances, superbly orchestrated songs, and finely scripted plays, our students are going to present before you a grand cultural fiesta!
Please tell me if this is fine.
It is an introduction to cultural program:
With scintillating dance performances, superbly orchestrated songs, and finely scripted plays, our students are going to present before you a grand cultural fiesta!
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vsuresh With scintillating dance performances, superbly orchestrated songs, and finely scripted plays, our students are going to present before you a grand cultural fiesta! Fine. With the sparkly language of the first part, however, I think you might need a little more sparkle at the end as well.
- vsuresh With scintillating dance performances, superbly orchestrated songs, and finely scripted plays, our students are going to present before you a grand cultural fiesta!
- Fine.
- With the sparkly language of the first part, however, I think you might need a little more sparkle at the end as well.
- "going to present" is a little lacking in that department, in my opinion.
- Here's my version.
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vsureshWith scintillating dance performances, superbly orchestrated songs, and finely scripted plays, our students are going to present before you a grand cultural fiesta!Fine.
With the sparkly language of the first part, however, I think you might need a little more sparkle at the end as well. "going to present" is a little lacking in that departme
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CalifJimWith scintillating dance performances, superbly orchestrated songs, and finely scripted plays, our students will delight you with a grand cultural fiesta!Thank you very much, CJ.
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