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Zybastek Posted 11 years ago
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Can someone please re-wright this sentence in a less techy way. or re-wright so it sounds more natural...

"It's good to see when other business use your features and implement them in their businesses".

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Can someone please rewrite this sentence in a less technical way or rewrite it so it sounds more natural ?

  • Can someone please rewrite this sentence in a less technical way or rewrite it so it sounds more natural ?
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Can someone please rewrite this sentence in a less technical way or rewrite it so it sounds more natural?
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Hi Mister Micawber

Thanks for replying to me, however, I was talking about this sentence lol.

It's good to see when other businesses use your features and implement them in their business.

Thanks
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Delete 'when', and the ending is superfluous:

It's good to see other businesses implement your features.

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