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Vsuresh Posted 11 years ago
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Hi
Please tell me if this is OK.

Organisation of the essay is very important. Ideas need to be placed in a such way that logical thread is maintained within paragraphs and also between paragraphs.
  

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Organisation of the essay is very important. Ideas need to be placed in such a way that a logical thread is maintained within paragraphs and also between paragraphs. That seems fine to me with the minor changes I made.

— Fivejedjon

  • Organisation of the essay is very important.
  • Ideas need to be placed in such a way that a logical thread is maintained within paragraphs and also between paragraphs.
  • That seems fine to me with the minor changes I made.
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vsureshHiPlease tell me if this is OK.Organisation of the essay is very important. Ideas need to be placed in such a way that a logical thread is maintained within paragraphs and also between paragraphs.
That seems fine to me with the minor changes I made.
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Additionally, it must at least be "such a way", not "a such way", not?
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Thanks. I missed that. I have changed it now.
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Thank you,fivejedjon
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