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Vsuresh Posted 11 years ago
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Context: Benefits of Coeducation

Children get emotional and moral support from the opposite gender when share their problems with them. Thus, early in life they learn to value the relationship of opposite gender and as time goes they only develop more and more positive attitude towards them.
  

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Children gain moral support from the opposite gender when they share their problems. Thus, early in life they learn to value their relationships with those of the opposite gend er, a nd as time goes by, they develop an increasingly positive attitude towards them.

— Mister Micawber

  • Children gain moral support from the opposite gender when they share their problems.
  • Thus, early in life they learn to value their relationships with those of the opposite gend er, a nd as time goes by, they develop an increasingly positive attitude towards them.
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Children gain moral support from the opposite gender when they share their problems. Thus, early in life they learn to value their relationships with those of the opposite gender, and as time goes by, they develop an increasingly positive attitude towards them.
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Thank you,sir.

Please help me with this sentence:
Mister MicawberThus, early in life they learn to value their relationships with those of the opposite gender
I wanted to convey that they learn to give importance to the relationship which they have with the opposite gender.

When I read the sentence with your correction, I think it means childre
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vsureshAm I correct?
No. It means this: they learn to give importance to the relationship which they have with the opposite gender.
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