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Vsuresh Posted 11 years ago
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The incidences of child marriage in cities when compared to that in villages is much less.
  

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The incidences of child marriage in cities when compared to that in villages is much less. Almost. You need The incidence of child marriage in cities, when compared to that in villages, is much less.

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vsureshHiPlease tell me if this sentence is OK.The incidences of child marriage in cities when compared to that in villages is much less.
Almost. You need

The incidence of child marriage in cities, when compared to that in villages, is much less.

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