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Vsuresh Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Sentence

Hi
Please tell me if this sentence is rightly constructed.

The following students  received merit scholarships for being among the 0.5 percent of the students who secured the highest score in different subjects in the Board Examination.
  

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5 percent of students with the highest scores in the Board Examination subjects.

  • 5 percent of students with the highest scores in the Board Examination subjects.
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It could benefit from some paring:

The following students have received merit scholarships for being among the 0.5 percent of students with the highest scores in the Board Examination subjects.
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Thank you very much,sir.

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